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     Monday Motivation: Three ways in which your writing could misfire – and how to fix it
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    By Richard Beynon
    In Monday Motivation, Richard Beynon's blog
    Posted June 3, 2019

    Monday Motivation: Three ways in which your writing could misfire – and how to fix it

    Mishaps happen all the time in writing. Most of them are little niggles, easily erased during a light edit. In one chapter the stable boy has a shock of blond […]

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    👁️ THE WRITER'S EYE: Learn to spot what other 👁️ THE WRITER'S EYE: Learn to spot what others miss "We all think we notice people and events, but most of us don't." In our recent webinar, Jo-Anne and Richard shared how the best writers train themselves to observe details others overlook—and how you can too! Did you know that focusing on just the right distinguishing detail can replace paragraphs of description? Or that watching people interact in a language you don't understand can actually improve your ability to read body language? Our participants discovered exercises to sharpen their observation skills and techniques to translate everyday moments into vivid prose. Watch the replay through the link in our bio! #WritingCommunity #WritingTips #CreativeWriting #WriterLife #ObservationSkills
    Observation: The Secret Weapon of Successful Story Observation: The Secret Weapon of Successful Storytellers In this month's newsletter, Jo-Anne shares her personal journey of learning to observe—from spotting elusive eagle rays underwater to studying human behaviour as someone on the autism spectrum. She reveals how deliberate observation became not just a survival skill but the foundation of her writing craft. Here are our top takeaways: *It’s a matter of observing actively – training your eyes to see what is before them. *Notice the way people speak to each other, the things they say, the way they seek love, friendship or companionship. *A book doesn’t simply consist of plot, or even character. You want to spirit your readers into another world. *A ‘small’ life doesn’t make for a small story. There are stories everywhere, and often the most compelling are those which are closest to home. #ObservationSkills #WritingInspiration #WritingSkills #StorytellingTips
    ✍️ THE CRITICAL SCREW IN YOUR STORY ✍️ "T ✍️ THE CRITICAL SCREW IN YOUR STORY ✍️ "The integrity of your entire story could well rely on the solution you seek – and so it's worth whatever hard labour it demands of you." This week, Richard explores how a single narrative flaw can determine the value of your entire manuscript. Swipe up in our story to read Richard's practical tips on identifying and repairing those seemingly small but critical elements in your writing. #AmWriting #WritersOfInstagram #WritingAdvice #StoryStructure #WritingCommunity #AuthorTips #CreativeWriting #WritingJourney
    ✍️NEW ON THE BLOG: Building a Community & Bran ✍️NEW ON THE BLOG: Building a Community & Brand Around Your Writing ✍️ Key takeaways from the London Book Fair 2025 panel. Huge thanks to @rosiekellett @paruledits @emmagannonuk Georgia Henry from @pitchagencyco for the great session 📝Community is more valuable than audience: Quality connections matter more than follower counts, with platforms like Substack fostering genuine engagement rather than superficial follows. 📝Focus on sustainability: Choose platforms and strategies you can maintain consistently rather than spreading yourself too thin across multiple channels. 📝Balance online and offline engagement: Create intimate in-person gatherings (like retreats or supper clubs) alongside your digital presence for more meaningful connections. 📝Social media can be valuable but only if you enjoy it: Georgia Henry emphasised that if you're not enjoying a platform, it's not worth forcing yourself to use it. 📝Authenticity is essential: Rosie Kellett noted that her most popular content comes from genuine vulnerability, while Emma Gannon advised writers to "follow your gut" and do what feels right rather than following trends. #WritingCommunity #AuthorBranding #WritersOfInstagram #AuthorPlatform #LBF25
    ✍️ WRITING TIP: "There was a loud crash that ✍️ WRITING TIP: "There was a loud crash that echoed through the empty hallway." Better: "A loud crash echoed through the empty hallway." Eliminate unnecessary "there was/is" constructions to make your writing more direct and powerful. Learn more sentence-crafting techniques in our Strong Sentences, Stronger Stories webinar. Link in bio to watch the full replay! #WritingCommunity #WritingTips
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    ✍️ WRITING MASTERCLASS: The Power of Sentence ✍️ WRITING MASTERCLASS: The Power of Sentence Structure A mini-lesson from Jo-Anne Richards on crafting stronger sentences. Swipe through for practical tips on improving your prose. Language is the foundation of good writing. Here's a common issue I see with many writers: the overuse of sentence fragments. While fragments can be powerful when used deliberately, they often weaken your prose when overused. Let's look at an example: "The nail bent. He hissed. Straightened. Angled his body. Aimed his hammer at the next nail." Notice how the choppy fragments create a repetitive pattern? Now compare with this: "He straightened. Angling his body, he aimed the hammer..." The second version varies sentence structure, creating natural flow while maintaining impact. Remember: Like screaming, sentence fragments lose their force if they're overused. Use them with intention for maximum effect. Want to learn more? Join our free writing webinar Strong Sentences, Stronger Stories. Link in bio! . . . #WritingCommunity #WritingTips #AmWriting #WritersOfInstagram #AuthorTips #WritingAdvice #WritingCraft #CreativeWriting #AuthorsOfInstagram #WritingMotivation #WritingLesson #WritingInspiration #WritingSkills
    ✍️ Transform your real-world insights into pow ✍️ Transform your real-world insights into powerful scenes with these writing tips from Richard Beynon. Swipe for practical techniques to elevate your storytelling. #WritingCommunity #WritingTips #AmWriting
    🔍 Struggling to plot your murder mystery? Lear 🔍 Struggling to plot your murder mystery? Learn how focusing on your antagonist can transform your story.Here are some practical tips and a targeted writing exercise. . . . WritingCommunity #WritingTips #MysteryWriter #AmWriting #WritersOfInstagram
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