The power of ‘show, don’t tell’
Many writers struggle with the age-old advice to “show, don’t tell” in their work, often finding it challenging to strike the right balance between description and narrative. In both this blog and my next subscriber-only Monday Writing Motivation mailer, I’ll explore how this principle applies not just to fiction, but to real-world storytelling using a recent political event as a source of writerly wisdom.
Show, don’t tell writing tips
- Use specific, concrete details to bring your scenes to life instead of relying on abstract statements.
- Create scenarios that demonstrate your character’s traits rather than simply stating them.
- Look for opportunities to turn exposition into action, allowing readers to draw their own conclusions.
Writing prompt
Choose a character from your current work-in-progress. Instead of describing their personality directly, write a short scene (250-300 words) that demonstrates their key traits through their actions, dialogue, and interactions with others.
Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. – Anton Chekhov
Want to dive deeper into the art of showing rather than telling? Sign up for our Monday Writing Motivation email for exclusive content, in-depth analysis, and actionable writing tips that will help you master this essential storytelling technique. We’ll explore how real-world events can inform our fiction writing and provide you with exercises to sharpen your skills in creating compelling, show-based narratives.
***
Please join us in Venice – virtually:
- For our next free writing webinar, broadcasting live from the inspiring city of Venice. This is your chance to tap into expert advice while virtually experiencing a tiny taste of one of the world’s most literary cities.
-
Follow along as we find inspiration in Venice’s winding canals, historic calle, and vibrant art scene, walking in the footsteps of the writers that have come before us. Whether you’re a writer seeking motivation, a lover of Italian culture, or simply in need of a virtual escape, our updates will bring a touch of Venetian magic to your day.
Join us on Instagram, Facebook or X to see Venice through a writer’s eyes and be part of our creative adventure.