June Newsletter: Writing tips galore
Two workshops in two towns – as removed as winter is from summer
All About Writing split itself in two this past week to offer writing advice on different continents – and in two towns which couldn’t be more different.
Jo-Anne and our travel and biography trainer Fred de Vries spent the weekend in the wintry Karoo for the Schreiner Karoo Writers Festival, while Richard and Trish presented a workshop in the lush Cotswolds market town of Stow-on-the-Wold.
Breathing vapour into the dry Cradock air, Jo-Anne and Fred gave a joint talk on drawing “real life” into fiction and non-fiction, while Jo-Anne presented a successful afternoon workshop on showing rather than telling.
The real bonus of attending this year’s Karoo Festival was the surprise appearance of Nobel Prize winning novelist JM Coetzee. At a morning gathering, he read a short story, Nietverloren, which he wrote some twenty years ago about the Karoo.
Coetzee was warmly introduced by poet and novelist Jonty Driver, who was in turn introduced by Coetzee. Driver read a series of poems from an anthology entitled Before. The evening before, Dorothy Driver, acclaimed writer and academic, spoke about her book, Olive Schreiner’s Poetics of Plants, in which she discusses Schreiner’s use of local plants in her writings.
Amid the blooming summer gardens of Stow, in the Cotswolds – when the rain let up, that is, Richard presented a weekend workshop on on dialogue, character and story with a contingent of eight UK writers all of whom confirmed that the programme had been both challenging and rewarding – not to mention fun.
In case you weren’t able to attend either, we’re sorry you missed the great writers, but here’s a distillation of what we offered in both our workshops.
Jo-Anne’s workshop – When to show and when to tell
- Every story contains a judicious mixture of “showing” and “telling”. Part of the skill of writing well is to judge what can be told, and what should best be shown.
- You “show” the unfolding of events in scenes, in which readers see, hear, smell and feel for themselves.
- You “tell” your readers what’s going on when you wish to give them an overview of an event or a series of events, without plunging them into the action.
- You might choose to “tell” rather than “show” for reasons of economy – it generally takes longer to “show”.
- Perhaps you’ve shown your reader a couple of dramatic scenes. Now you wish to carry them briefly over the next two weeks, in which much the same continues to happen.
- If something is dramatic, affects your character and carries the story forward, it should invariably be shown.
- If you gloss over a dramatic event, by telling instead of showing, you short-change us.
For example, “A terrible fight ensued which ended, of course, in tears.” That is unsatisfying because we miss out on the drama, the twists and turns, the emotional violence, of the fight.
- A virtual taboo should be placed on explaining to and interpreting for the reader – leave them to work things out for themselves.
Thanks to the AMAZWI South African Museum of Literature for keeping this vibrant little festival – and Olive Schreiner’s legacy – alive.
Richard’s workshop – Dialogue, character, and story
- Dialogue is one of the key ways in which character expresses itself, and of course character drives story.
- Dialogue is an essential element in the expression of character in both fiction and non-fiction, on the page and on the screen.
- Dialogue tells us a great deal about characters and their relationships.
- It shows us things without the narrator/author having to tell us anything.
- It is capable of revealing the motives, even the hidden motives and agendas of characters.
- The choice of a single word will tell us something about the character, about their agenda.
- You can use dialogue to create character. Of course, you could tell us all about the character. But until they open their mouths we’re not really convinced.
- You want to be in a position where you know them as well as you know anyone in your life. Then you’ll understand intuitively what they’re likely to do and say.
- Character leads to story. It drives story, provoking events, creating conflict, solving problems.
- What the protagonist wants will determine the story because it’ll define the central conflict and uncertainty of the story. What or who is dedicated to preventing her getting what she wants?
- What is the nature of that conflict? Climaxes then form around her partial successes and partial failures.
- The three-act structure is a recognition of the fact that story requires cause and effect relationships between incidents and responses; and between the character and the story.
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We are still accepting participants, so join us, whether you’re a complete newbie or a more experienced writer who needs to unblock and remind yourself of the skills for writing fiction or creative non-fiction. You won’t look back.
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Would the winners of the April/May Writing Challenge please step forward
Hey ho, to the winner’s podium we go for the April/May Writing Challenge. What we asked you to do, if you remember, is “write a scene in which a well-meaning neighbour manages to stomp all over your protagonist’s young cauliflowers, which she’s been cultivating for some time. She’s upset.” We urged you not to be too obvious – and to avoid all shouting…
The winner – you might recognise the name, she’s a stalwart who regularly uses the writing challenges to hone her craft – is Mitzi Bunce. We loved her piece – and particularly her likening a head of cabbage to a severed human head – and the restraint of the writing.
The runners-up, in no particular order, are Claire Manicom, Liz Lewis, Mark Varder, Sheila Hughes, Bonnie Espie, and Carla Brown.
Well done all of you – but it’s to Mitzi that the laurels – and the prize go: a literary assessment on 5000 words of writing worth R2750 or a voucher to the same value to use on one (or more) of our courses or programmes. And for those who didn’t win, but aspire to, here’s a link to all the courses that might help you win those plaudits! Click here to read all the winning entries.
Enter our June/July Flash Fiction Challenge
This time around, we’re seeking post-apocalyptic romantic flash fiction (no more than 250 words). Think teenagers making out in ruins, couples separated by shattered continents, robot-and-human couples… get creative and have fun!
Write no more than 250 words. Paste your entry into the body of an email and send to email@example.com by midnight on 31 July.
Click here to read some writing tips we’re curated specifically for this challenge…
Jo-Anne, Richard and the All About Writing team